PV of my web comic INEVITABLE WORLD SHIFT

I would like to share PV(done as a personal project) of my web comic INEVITABLE WORLD SHIFT
Any your comments and critiques would be appreciated.Thank you :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dgGyCJ165X0

This animated film is made as PV of my web comic.
Link to 100 pages comic released on my HP.

http://minase-souya.sakura.ne.jp/2dcg/comic_UB_ep001_ver200_jp_htmlVer/comic_UB_ep001_ver200_jp_htmlVer_p001.html

ScreenShots

ミナセ宗谷「イネヴィタブル・ワールドシフト