Here is my entry for this months clip, its still missing the kid But this is where i am at now.
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Lol, nice! I haven't seen it with sound yet (I'm at a library computer), but I love the acting. The motion is fluid and light... Also, I like the little wiggle at the end where the clerk is rubbing his hands together.
That's great--I hope to see more of your work soon!
Pooryorik
Thanks alot! I will definatley keep them coming!
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Here is some more progress
Progress
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Worked some more on it this sat, I am pretty happy with it.
10 sec club
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This looks good Don. A couple little things though. When he slides in, he should be leading with his hips and his upper body and hands should be dragging behind his hips. Also when he first stands up, he moves upwards and just sticks there. For the speed and amount of mass moving, he should really go up, then settle back down alittle.
It's looking really good. It's very impressive the amount that you've improved over the months. Keep it up!
Mahalo,
the Ape
...we must all face a choice, between what is right... and what is easy."
Thanks so much ape! ITs nice to hear people say they see a change in my work, sometimes I dont know if im getting any better, as I go. So thanks!
Final
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