Hi everyone. I have just finished my latest short animated film 'Cliff & Richard'. I would really appriecate your feedback on it.
Please have a look on the link below. Any questions please message me.
Cheers, Jon
Hi everyone. I have just finished my latest short animated film 'Cliff & Richard'. I would really appriecate your feedback on it.
Please have a look on the link below. Any questions please message me.
Cheers, Jon
Ok everyone, you win..... I'm on my knees, hands grasped.... willing to beg... please leave feedback on my film.... good or bad.... would really appreicate your feedback....
http://www.taylormation.co.uk/pages/cliffrich.htm
Thanks, Jon.
Hmmmmmmm......."Fruity Tales", eh?
Neat technique. Good Voices. Why is Richard squished rather than picked up and eaten in the way the Cliff descibed or worse yet, made into juice? Could be off camera to his screams. WHo would squish a fruit with a plate...even an escapee orange?
On the whole I didn't get it.
I would suggest drawing two individual eyes rather than one eye file used for two to add some assymetry to eye direction and expression.
Is there a reason they're named after the grandaddy of British pop stars?
I'm pondering this short like your oranges ponder life.
Thanks for your thoughts, all very helpful.
Why was he squished? The idea is he doesn't want to die the 'normal' way but when he tries to escape he still dies a rather horrible death. Why a plate? Something that your not expecting, bit of shock factor.
The juice idea is cool... maybe a sequel!
I understand what your saying about the eyes, good tip. Some scenes are done as single pupils some joined depended on the shot and where the eyes finshed.
They were named after Sir Cliff cuz.... well....em.... poeple know the name straight away.... hopefully raise a bit of interest and again sounds quite cool.
Thanks again for your feedback.
I did think the eyes were animated well.
I have sent 'Cliff & Richard' to Bradford animation festival! Hopefully it will get accepted!