Hey guys! I am finally uploading the 2d animation that I am working on. Please tell me what you think about it.
I dont really like the sigh at the beginning. I had removed for a while but I put it back so you guys could comment on it. The part after the dialogue goes faster than I want it to. The dog is supposed to go from his slumped position to and up-right and leaning slightly forward position. Now that I mention it I should have captured a frame of him in that pose so you all could see what I am talking about. >_< Just look at the last frame in the sequence and imagine him leaning forward a little, with his right hand outstretched and his left hand at his side. Anyway, it goes fast because I only have 8 frames from after he says mother to his next bit of dialogue. I split the antic into four frames and the coming up into four frames. As a result the whole thing goes pretty quickly. Does anyone have any advice on a better way to divide the frames up or a way to slow the animation down at that part?
I dont like the small step forward that the dog makes. I included that because his feet are further forward in his up-right pose than they are in the other poses. I'll just bring them back the next time I work on this.
All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated(sp?). :D
"Animation isn't about how well you draw, but how much to believe." -Glen Keane