Hi everyone!
I just finished my first student film and was hoping for some feedback. I learned so much making this film and am so excited to make another one! Anyway, all comments/critiques very welcome!
Small:
http://www.elizafrye.com/animation/on-off_sm_mov.php
Large:
http://www.elizafrye.com/animation/on-off_sm_mov.php
Thanks!
- Eliza
Very nice....very smooth.......
Character Animator
Me and the Graph Editor have a understanding
Hey, the animation was awesome! The movement was smooth and the music matched perfectly. But what happend to the happy ending? Keep up the good work.
Oh man that's good. I should let you know the artwork itself was good enough so that I only paid attention to the story, so that's a bonus in itself.
I like two things especially: Her deviant smile when he whips out the sword, and her "reaching" for the cords that aren't there at the end. EXCELLENT touches.
So sick and sad but in a non-violent non-graphic way.