starting an animated sitcom

Greetings everyone,

so I am in the process of writing my first episode for an animated sitcom. In a nutshell its about a group of coworkers who experience everyday situations in extraordinary ways. I draw my inspiration for the sitcom from Seinfeld, the office, adventure time, and Regular show.

My first episode is called "The First Day"

Jack helps Ted find some coffee to stay awake during his shift. While trying to get the drink from the forbidden customer lounge they are faced toe to toe with the lounge guards and must escape w/o being captured.

basically the episode plays out like this

-ted falls asleep. jack takes him for coffee

-the line for coffee is too long in the break room

-jack takes ted to customer lounge they sneak past the guardsmen

-attempting to take the fancy coffee and alarm goes off

-guardsmen rush in and start beating up ted and jack

-jack throws the hot coffee in guardsmen's face

-ted distracts the other with a donut and they escape tired and bruised

-hobbling back to their desks

-jack opens his drawer and realizes he had instant coffee the whole time

-end

looking for all feedback good/bad

Thanks!