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FIRST animation! please critique

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FIRST animation! please critique

Hello! I'm new here and very new to animation so I thought I would show you my very first animation in adobe flash and you can all tell me why I suck and how I can do better. The animations are at the very beginning and very end of my friends youtube videos found here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=68xmRyOPQQM

Okay first of all why did the girl get all mad in the beginning about the light bulb?
It gives the impression that person in the video is mad and angry but in the video but actually she's really nice. Also at the end the subscribe text needs to be a brighter contrast between the sky so that it is easier to see. Other than that the animation is really smooth and connected which is one thing that new animators seem to have trouble with.

-A ninja animator