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these are rejected scenes, still looking for some feedback on em' please....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qxsflKbDmd4&context=C45f8908ADvjVQa1PpcFMP2HanuXRryKXz-kNadxJXIaIj4umbY8c=

These scenes are filler from cigit war II a history channel spoof on wwII with cigarettes depicting soldiers and icons - Joseph Stogin, Adolf Cigler etc...
any ideas are welcomed as well as funny names related WWII with tobacco product and such...

It was interesting but I have a couple of ideas for your scene. You should make more models of your solders like in the opening scene. Make three or four more different models and randomly place them in your formation. You should break up multiple character action, even if they are separated at opposite sides of the scene.

There some other things but I think that is enough for now.

Thanks I'll try that, I was going to completely redo some more filler scenes but that will work for quite a few of them... When I've finished the first cut of the episode I'll post a link, Thanks again

Well,your work is very funny indeed,but I do agree with Wontobe,it will become more attracting if you try to make it larger,both in elements and width.

thank you very much for the complement :) I can't seem to find the original files for the scene in which wontobe is talking about so I just shortened it and threw it back in...I think I got what you were saying but not sure anyways first 45 seconds of the first episode - 1939 - is here minus the intro and pretty plain vocals I do all my own stuff from drawing to animating and voice acting...my vocal skills could use some work...
http://youtu.be/eSrU9Fqawwc