Writing The TV Animation Premise

Jean Ann Wright begins a series of articles on writing for animation. Here she outlines the steps to getting started, what to discuss in your first story meeting, and writing, the all important, story premise.

Jean Ann Wright.
Getting Started
You want to be an animation writer and you have some really cool ideas for your favorite show. So? First you have to write a sample script to submit to the story editor of that show. Try surfing online to find an actual animation script that you can use as a template for format. Write your sample script for a show that's similar to the show you want to pitch. DO NOT write a sample for the same show you want to pitch, as the story editor will know that show too well and he'll see only the script's flaws. Try to meet professional animation writers and story editors. Learn who they are by looking at the credits of animated shows. Join animation organizations. Go to seminars and workshops and introduce yourself to the writers and story editors there. Network! But never be a pest! When your sample script is ready, contact the story editor you want to pitch, and ask if you can submit a sample of your writing. Be sure it's your very best! You can submit a copy of your sample script to an animation agent as well, but an agent is not a must to find work.

Preparation
Before you meet with a story editor, watch as many episodes as you can of that story editor's show. Watch it when it airs; watch old episodes that you've previously taped or rented. Analyze the episodes. How long is each? What makes this show popular? How is it different? What's the level of reality? What are the rules of that cartoon universe? What makes it funny? Who are the main characters, and what makes them funny? Make notes about each. How many characters are in a typical episode? How many locations are used in each? Analyze the structure. Who wants what? Time exactly where each plot point comes in. What kind of humor is used? Is there a lesson, and how is it handled? Be sure you really know the main characters and their attitude! The more that you know about the show, the better chance you have of getting a shot at writing an episode. And usually you get that shot by submitting written premises or story ideas. Premises are short and written in narrative form. Unfortunately, there's no pay for writing them.

Meeting the Story Editor
OK! The story editor likes your script, and you've set up a meeting. Come prepared with several imaginative, twenty-five-word-or-less ideas for episodes, springboards that you can pitch verbally, if asked. Request a bible of the show, a script and a copy of several premises. The writer's bible contains information about the show and the show's characters. Listen carefully to everything the story editor tells you, and make notes. Ask questions. Does this show have an A plot and a B plot? Short cartoons do not, longer cartoons often do. Does the show have a joke ratio per page? What are the demographics or target age of this show? And is the target specific, or are the executives hoping for a wide range of viewers? What length does the story editor want your premises to be? Usual length is about one page, but each story editor has his own preference. How many premises does the editor want you to write before submitting the batch...three, four? When do you need to submit your first batch? Animation writing deadlines are usually very short, and you'll want to submit your ideas quickly. As a new writer, you'll probably be lucky to have one idea selected. And you may have to submit premises a number of times before any are given the go-ahead.










Comments


You do have a point, and I plead no contest to the formulaic sarcasm. You're also right in that the industry in its current state is not a place for the true creative original. It's all about the fastest, easiest way to make money - which, incidentally, has been the nature of the film industry since its inception (I don't think that's dandy, I'm just reporting the facts). I look at Chaplin, who learned the process of filmmaking from the Keystone Cops, possibly the most formula-driven creation in film history. He learned how to do the basics, and then he turned it around by adding his own concept of what a comedy film should be. Not long after, he had the money to do pretty much whatever came into his head to do. This is my point - new writers should learn what's out there and how it's done. Then they can confidently go out there with the knowledge of what NOT to do. Sure, a large percentage will choose the other path and settle for the BMW and the monkey-pressing-the-keys writer's gig. So what? It doesn't change what I do (except to avoid them on the freeway). Besides, partial blame should be placed on the audience and advertisers that don't DEMAND more from the cookie cutter studios. There aren't many Chaplins (or Hubleys or McLarens or Leafs) out there, but the important thing is that they DO exist and people like you and I recognize the value of what they offer (sorry if I assume too much there). The rest can watch Scooby-Doo Babies On Ice and I could care less. I have more important stuff to do, like spend way too much time agonizing over the comments on AWN. Or...something.
David Billings (not verified) | Mon, 06/24/2002 - 00:00 | Permalink
First off David, the smartass old hat sarcastic counterattack paragraph about my success writing sitcoms (I've never written a tv sitcom...get it! HA HA HA) is such a lame and formulaic response it's really a waste of our short time here...but obviously you're already well-versed for a career as a television writer! I wouldnt write for tv in it's current incarnation (well...except maybe Mr. Show or Homicide), so it's a moot point. Anyone who follows and believes Jean's advice is solely out to make a buck...out to make a career, not out to do something respectful, not out to contribute in a meaningful way to society. And hey...sure that's ok... Since scribbling bad stolen premises for television requires little in the way of actual thinking, writing or heck, even spelling, and in turn deems the scribbler with the lofty title "Writer" who wouldnt want it!? And that brings with it RESPECT from EVERYONE, and money, nice clothes, and a fancy home. What's not to like? Television writing, in general, requires less use of the cerebrum realm than driving a taxi, washing dishes or parking cars...so shit ya...why not, BABY! I am certainly not out to attack Jean. I dont know her from you, but I am attacking her ideas which, although rightfully earned, are very lazy, sloppy, and unselfconscious reinforcements of a rigid system that needs very much to be broken apart. This is another case where just because someone has done something long enough, they're automatically called an expert, and that's baloney. Doing something WELL never seems to enter into the equation. And hey...maybe Jean did develop dandy hero-villain-heroine-sidekicks in WAY over-done premises, but let's be serious, this is work that is no more worthy then rippin open that greasy plastic bag, dumping the meat injected fries into the boiling frie VAT without getting any on your polyester pants. Jean's words have nothing to do with writing, just as cooking fast food fries has nothing to do with cuisine.
Chris Robinson (not verified) | Sun, 06/23/2002 - 00:00 | Permalink

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