Inspired 3D Short Film Production: Story — Part 2
The Pickle
In this structure, the protagonist finds himself in a predicament (often caused by his own negligence or poor judgment), which he must solve or escape from. In many cases, a beat-the-clock scenario is involved. The Sorcerer's Apprentice is a classic example. Others include Top Gum, Locomotion and Coffee Love (see Figure 26).
The Parody
This structure is a parody of a documentary, television commercial, or any other existing property. Creature Comforts and Fishman are fine examples.
I Wish
The Rescue The Journey
In this structure, the protagonist yearns for (or remembers) a happier or more exciting time or situation. Examples in shorts include Comics Trip, Le Deserteur and Red's Dream from Pixar (see Figure 27).
In this structure, someone (or a group of characters) shows up and saves the day. Bunkie & Booboo and La Morte de Tau are two examples. If a character rescues himself, the story either falls under the escape or pickle category.
There are two types of journey structures:
Fine Arts If you are planning to write a short story of more narrative complexity than a single-beat gag, a simple monologue or a fine arts piece, make sure your plot elements are clear, significant, interesting, and well structured. The setup must spark the audience's interest. The protagonist's goal must be worthy and difficult to achieve to make success triumphant or failure tragic. The main opposing force must be powerful enough to make the challenge interesting. The occasional roadblocks along the journey must be more than simply trivial distractions; otherwise, they won't contribute anything to the action. The ending must be satisfying and logical, and at least some element of your story must be particularly unique or there won't be any reason for anyone to watch your film (and thus there will be no reason for you to enter the production phase).
Keeping it Short
This structure consists of a non-narrative series of imagery and movement, almost always set to music. This is not a true "story"; however, if the imagery is significantly unique or interesting, it can be an extremely engaging and memorable piece. Examples include Garden of the Metal and Au Petit Mort (see Figure 28).
Strive to keep your film as short as possible without compromising flow and clarity. The shorter your story, the simpler it will be to produce as a film and the easier it will be to keep your audience engaged. Here are a few thoughts to keep in mind while developing your story that should help keep things short and sweet:
![[Figure 27] A character dreaming of a better, happier, safer, or more interesting time or place can make for a poignant and entertaining animated short.](http://www.awn.com/files/imagepicker/1/shorts02-27.jpg)
![[Figure 28] Animated shorts with unique and captivating imagery in motion and an intentional absence of significant story elements are known as fine arts films, such as Au Petite Mort from Little Fluffy Clouds.](http://www.awn.com/files/imagepicker/1/shorts02-28.jpg)























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